Sitting amidst the almost silent bustle of the courtroom, Paul Matthews fidgets with his papers. He is lean, sharply dressed, every crease is well tailored, not a hair is out of place on his head. For . . . more
"In a way I think that you may be right, but I do think that someone can be 'objective' if they really put forth the effort. What this really means, I think, is not just utilizing information garnered from . . ." more
"I like this response, in a way you bring out that we all see ourselves as objective viewers of what goes on around us, about the things that concern us. I guess with that idea in mind I would have to say . . ." more
"Okay, so I see that you are trying to do what the question asks about possibility wise. Now the real question is, are you doing it objectively or are you only looking at what you think is good? Or are . . ." more
"I don't think that you or Cena are correct, it is never too early to evaluate someone or something. You evaluation may be very limited, and is likely to be much different than, say, a final evaluation, . . ." more
Hey, I understand about the transition. I wrote the first draft of my novel in present tense, and had to change it all to past tense when I fleshed it out. Months later, I was still finding places I missed.
David, by no means think of my comments as anything but my opinions, and helpful advice. I would love it if you would view my own novel I'm posting here. You can start here, or check out any of my featured posts. Keep writing.
David, I am so glad that you commented on the main site, I had a really hard time finding who you were! I will do my comments now! Sorry they are late.
